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                                    Artist
                                        Were I
                                        to rub you
                                        the wrong way,
                                        what chaff may
                                        be sloughed off
                                        from the surface
                                        of your BEing, and
                                        uncomfortable
                                        as it may feel,
                                        what diamond
                                        may be revealed
                                        at your core—
                                        what's more,
                                        after the chaffing,
                                        where might one
                                        polish to abolish
                                        the last of that
                                        which you
                                        hold near
                                        in fear
                                        of revealing, truly,
                                        your own brightness
                                        and beauty into the world?
                                        
                                        If I rub you the wrong
                                        way, know it is
                                        most likely
                                        unintentional,
                                        and may
                                        perhaps—
                                        perhaps, help
                                        in the eventual
                                        revelation
                                        of the
                                        diamond
                                        within
                                        you.
                                        
                                        In response, and inspired by a poem within the book, THE GIFT, Poems by HAFIZ, The Great Sufi Master, Translations by Daniel Ladinsky.
                                        
                                        Certainly not to say I am a master or even an apprentice in any way of poetry or mystical insight—all is simply a creative endeavor to see what my own mind and heart may say of the poem, to try and put it into my own words, or simply to respond to the ideas set forth by HAFIZ, and translated by Daniel.
                                        
                                        (My apologies, this footnote will be repeated as I intend, at least presently, to continue in this mode for awhile. I am quite curious how AI will interpret things and how I may work and play, tweek words and such to perhaps change the direction AI is taking, in the end, hopefully to make a dream worthwhile sharing.)
                                        
                                        Now made into a song, thanks to Riffusion. Link below, if you wish to give a listen  : )
                                        https://www.riffusion.com/song/ffebe6ed-6ed1-4ead-9601-84bb7c92b5af