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Use the supplied image as the exact visual reference. The previous correction to the dress is correct. KEEP the current construction of the gown exactly as it is: the gold fringe must remain entirely on the front of the purple bodice and must continue to end cleanly before the exposed side/back beneath her right arm. CHANGE ONLY THE APPEARANCE OF THE EXISTING FRONT GOLD FRINGE. Make the long gold fringe slightly less dense, more delicate, and more naturally spaced. Reduce the number of individual hanging strands so that small areas of the purple gown and natural space can be seen between them. The fringe should feel airy, graceful and luxurious rather than forming a dense solid curtain. Keep the fringe predominantly long, but introduce subtle natural variation in the lengths of individual strands. Avoid a perfectly straight or rectangular lower edge. Create a refined handcrafted rhythm: some individual beaded strands, occasional small groupings of strands, and delicate variations in spacing and length. The effect should resemble sophisticated hand-beaded fringe on an expensive 1920s Art Deco evening gown — fluid, elegant and ornamental, with visible separation between the strands. IMPORTANT: Keep the fringe completely off her exposed side and back. Do not restore any hanging strands beneath or behind her right arm. Do not change the shape or construction of the purple bodice. Do not redesign the dress. Do not add additional jewelry, chains or ornamentation. Preserve everything else exactly as shown: her face, expression, hair, headpiece, feathers, earrings, body, skin, pose, arms, hands, cocktail glass, goldfish, purple gown, nightclub, patrons, bar, reflections, lighting, colors, composition, painterly surface and period atmosphere. The ONLY change should be making the existing front fringe somewhat less dense, more naturally spaced, and subtly varied in length.
A lively, hand-painted gouache illustration on board in a cheeky Americana style, capturing a 20-something female's playful irreverence. A glamorous young brunette woman lounges at the bar, elegantly holding a martini glass -- rendered with crisp, transparent brushstrokes—with a single simple, detailed goldfish swimming inside of it - a popular affectation amongst the lost generation.
