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One Night
It was
so Beautiful
We felt
the Greatest Creator
Just Might
come knocking
at the door
of our hearts
with
Golden Guitar
in Hand
to join our band
with Heavenly
Music.
Plus, It was
as though
the winds
joined in
with visible swirls
unfurling
sparkling cosmic
dust
to draw our eyes
up to the skies
where the stars
winked back at us
with a multitude
of glistening
colours.
Children who should
have been in bed
were allowed instead
to experience this
gentle summer
night
and while
they played
with delight
amongst
the lush
new
green of plants
their glances
sparkled
with Love.
Then as our senses
flew on wings
to greater heights,
we thought again
we just might
catch sight of the
Greatest Creator
of this Beauty,
that truly
our minuscule
sense
of existence
might just
fathom the reason
for Being here
encapsulated
within this
Divine
Moment.
So then,
Our Only Regret
was
that we could
not say
in person
to the
Greatest Creator
“Thank You!”
for this
Beautiful
Night.
Song = https://newbuds.bandcamp.com/track/so-beautiful
In response, and inspired by a poem within the book, THE GIFT, Poems by HAFIZ, The Great Sufi Master, Translations by Daniel Ladinsky.,
Certainly not to say I am a master or even an apprentice in any way of poetry or mystical insight—all is simply a creative endeavor to see what my own mind and heart may say of the poem, to try and put it into my own words, or simply to respond to the ideas set forth by HAFIZ, and translated by Daniel.
(My apologies, this footnote will be repeated as I resume again this mode of playful tapping for inspiration from reading one poem a day or so until I finish the book. I am quite curious how AI will interpret things and how I may work and play, tweek words and such to perhaps change the direction AI is taking, in the end, hopefully to make a dream worthwhile sharing.)